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Eileen Niedfield
- ... that doctors stationed in India, like Eileen Niedfield MD of the Medical Mission Sisters, trained nurses for Mother Teresa's Missionaries of Charity, and sometimes they trained each other's teams?
- ALT1: ... that [Medical Mission Sisters
- Reviewed:
- Comment: I'm not sure if I'm supposed to include links and formatting, so I did. Thank you!
Improved to Good Article status by Oh-Fortuna! (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.
Oh-Fortuna! (talk) 02:37, 1 May 2025 (UTC).
- Willing to review but there's no hook Oh-Fortuna! (t · c) buidhe 03:20, 1 May 2025 (UTC)
- @Buidhe:I think the hook stripped out because I added formatting, so just now I put it back without formatting, and cut it down to one hook. If you want formatting I can send a version with that. Oh-Fortuna! (talk) 16:30, 1 May 2025 (UTC)
- There's a ton of great DYK material in the article, I'm quite sure we can do better than that. Something about being invited to Bhutan, belonging to a Catholic religious order while helping Muslim and Christian women, etc. (t · c) buidhe 04:33, 2 May 2025 (UTC)
- Okay, how about this? ... that Eileen Niedfield MD, a Medical Mission Sister in India from 1955-1992, treated rural Muslim women who could not afford care and whose fathers or husbands would not let them consult male doctors? Oh-Fortuna! (talk) 19:01, 2 May 2025 (UTC)
- Shorter is better when it comes to hookiness. I see this is your first DYK so if you don't mind let me propose an alt. Also, please remember to boldface and link the article in question.
- ALT1b ... that Catholic sister Eileen Niedfield treated many Muslim women whose fathers or husbands would not let them consult male doctors? (t · c) buidhe 03:23, 3 May 2025 (UTC)
- @Buidhe:This looks fine to me. I'd just suggest adding one word, and change one other:
- ALT1c... that Catholic sister Eileen Niedfield MD treated Indian Muslim women whose fathers or husbands would not let them consult male doctors? Oh-Fortuna! (talk) 11:41, 3 May 2025 (UTC)
- ALT1d... that Catholic sister Eileen Niedfield MD treated Muslim women in India whose fathers or husbands would not let them consult male doctors?
- ALT1c... that Catholic sister Eileen Niedfield MD treated Indian Muslim women whose fathers or husbands would not let them consult male doctors? Oh-Fortuna! (talk) 11:41, 3 May 2025 (UTC)
- @Buidhe:This looks fine to me. I'd just suggest adding one word, and change one other:
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Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation |
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Overall: ALT1c approved (t · c) buidhe 04:49, 4 May 2025 (UTC)